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“When a group of social justice ANTIFA wannabe’s attack his retirement community, a legendary retired hitman and his old mob buddies show the young punks, they messed with the wrong town.”
That was a great logline re-write!
That was a great logline re-write!
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You need to make the lead likable so that the audience will follow along as the lead does more and more questionable things to avoid suspicion. A: The Boss's death should happen in an understandable way. -Or- B: The boss should be portrayed as particularly bad, or perhaps scuzzy. Just some thoughts:Read more
You need to make the lead likable so that the audience will follow along as the lead does more and more questionable things to avoid suspicion.
A: The Boss’s death should happen in an understandable way.
-Or-
B: The boss should be portrayed as particularly bad, or perhaps scuzzy.
Just some thoughts:
At the beginning of the story, the lead is asked to place a very large and expensive bottle of liquor on the top shelf for all to see.
As her shift ends the boss comes on to her against her will. The bar gets bumped and the very large bottle (With her fingerprints all over it) Falls onto the boss’s head killing him.
She panics, (perhaps she has a criminal record) as the car owned by his boss’s wife pulls up to the bar. She grabs the bottle with her fingerprints and escapes out the back.
The Twist at the end: We discover the lead didn’t kill the boss, He was still alive when she left. (She just thought he was dead) The wife finds him and finish’s him off to get out of the prenuptial where she doesn’t get anything if she divorces him.
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"When humanity decides the only way to save the planet is through total human extinction, a crack anti-terrorist organization is tasked with stopping an insurgent group dead set on stoping their plan to save the earth."
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