1. Posted: August 5, 2020In:

    Claudia Amanda, a compliant daughter of a tycoon, has to entangle in an agreement to save his dad and the people behind the success of their company.

    Richiev Singularity

    What sets the story in motion? I mean specifically, "When" (This thing happens) Also, what is standing in the way of the lead character achieving her goal? Who is against saving the company? Finally, you should change the word "Entangled" it doesn't work. In fact, you should probably drop the entireRead more

    What sets the story in motion? I mean specifically, “When” (This thing happens)

    Also, what is standing in the way of the lead character achieving her goal? Who is against saving the company?

    Finally, you should change the word “Entangled” it doesn’t work. In fact, you should probably drop the entire thing about an agreement if you are not going to explain it. Who does she make an agreement with, and what makes this agreement so important to the story?

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  2. Posted: August 4, 2020In:

    An arrogant crime scene cleaner and her impressionable partner/best friend begin a messy murder spree to provide the work that’ll save their business from going under.

    Richiev Singularity

    From a logline perspective, I think it is all there.

    From a logline perspective, I think it is all there.

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  3. Posted: August 3, 2020In:

    A plus size woman competes with her sexy, gold-digger friend for the man of her dreams.

    Richiev Singularity

    To play the Devils Advocate... I think the purpose of the story is to show that a Plus-sized woman can be sexy too.

    To play the Devils Advocate… I think the purpose of the story is to show that a Plus-sized woman can be sexy too.

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