1. Posted: August 13, 2020In:

    After a raid by a corrupt government leaves his partner dead, a desperate man uses gang controlled technology to escape his dystopian world to an alternate reality in a bid to replace a version of himself living an idealistic life.

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    Is there an inciting incident to this story? Just curious. "When (This happens) a desperate man uses underground technology to transport himself to an alternate reality in order to secretly switch places with a spoiled and privileged version of himself."

    Is there an inciting incident to this story? Just curious.

    “When (This happens) a desperate man uses underground technology to transport himself to an alternate reality in order to secretly switch places with a spoiled and privileged version of himself.”

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  2. Posted: August 13, 2020In:

    When her boyfriend’ doctors are unable to treat his fatal illness, an unsophisticated Papuan girl in service to his father must convince him to abandon his traditional medical views and travel to Papua to allow her and her Medicine man grandfather to save is life.

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    I think it reads well this way, from the perspective of the girlfriend. It does seem like she is the one with the actual story goal. to get her boyfriend to her medicine man Grandfather.

    I think it reads well this way, from the perspective of the girlfriend. It does seem like she is the one with the actual story goal. to get her boyfriend to her medicine man Grandfather.

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  3. Posted: August 12, 2020In:

    When a young man discovers a magic sword that gives him the power to see the curse that he has due to his sins and that will guide him to the lost city where he will be healed, he will have to deal with the supreme leader of his former city as well as the guilt of past actions.

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    Possible title: "Awry"

    Possible title: “Awry”

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