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When an ex-con returns home to find his estranged daughter depressed by an ugly world, he aims to make the entire town litter-free in an attempt to win her back.
Pretty solid
Pretty solid
See lessWhen a successful entomologist and his father, an army reserve, are humiliated by the public because of a new insect display that goes wrong, he must gain respect back for his family while saving his captive father from the greedy military, and uncover the secrets behind the mysterious weaponized insect before humans become the endangered species.
You kinda bury the lead... at the end of the logline we find out the very survival of the human race is at stake... that is far more important than a little bit of humiliation. You might want to lead with that.
You kinda bury the lead… at the end of the logline we find out the very survival of the human race is at stake… that is far more important than a little bit of humiliation.
You might want to lead with that.
See lessAfter her kitten was kidnapped, a girl must team up with her friends to track down the thief by invading his home.
In a logline, words matter, besides the issue of not starting off in the present tense, an easy fix, (When her kitten IS stolen) the big issue with this logline is the wording. How can they invade the thieves home if they haven't tracked him down? This wording comes across as backwards. How does invRead more
In a logline, words matter, besides the issue of not starting off in the present tense, an easy fix, (When her kitten IS stolen) the big issue with this logline is the wording.
How can they invade the thieves home if they haven’t tracked him down?
This wording comes across as backwards.
How does invading his home help them track the thief down since, if they know where the thief lives, they have already tracked him down?
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