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The ice caps have melted. The air supply is poisoned. The human race teeters on the brink of survival. One woman strives to challenge the re-emerging patriarchy. When the situation arises, how will society choose to rebuild itself?
You should put a face the patriarchy, one person who represents it. probably a leader of some sort. Also, you haven't told us what sets this story in motion. You give us a problem, Icecaps melted, and air supply poisoned... then tell us the dramatic problem is the patriarchy. If the patriarchy is thRead more
You should put a face the patriarchy, one person who represents it. probably a leader of some sort.
Also, you haven’t told us what sets this story in motion. You give us a problem, Icecaps melted, and air supply poisoned… then tell us the dramatic problem is the patriarchy.
If the patriarchy is the dramatic problem the story should begin with what event causes that problem when it specifically comes to the patriarchy.
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Not sure why we are pulling for the lead to succeed
Not sure why we are pulling for the lead to succeed
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Pretty solid I could tell the show from the logline, You could probably drop the word ruthless because backstab, manipulate, and kill are all more descriptive of what it means to be ruthless. However a great example logline.
Pretty solid
I could tell the show from the logline, You could probably drop the word ruthless because backstab, manipulate, and kill are all more descriptive of what it means to be ruthless.
However a great example logline.
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