1. Posted: April 19, 2020In:

    After a spoilt but sophisticated graduate becomes seriously ill, to survive he must abandon his views on modern medicine and rely on his Papuan girlfriend?s holistic advise.

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    "When his doctors are stumped on how to treat his rare disease, a spoiled but sophisticated graduate reluctantly travels to Papua on the advice of his Papuan girlfriend who believes her Medicine man grandfather can heal him."

    “When his doctors are stumped on how to treat his rare disease, a spoiled but sophisticated graduate reluctantly travels to Papua on the advice of his Papuan girlfriend who believes her Medicine man grandfather can heal him.”

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  2. Posted: April 19, 2020In:

    ?An emerging artist comes to town to become an art star, but it won’t be easy for him, there he falls in love with a promising young lawyer. A car accident leaves the couple in a coma, only one can live thanks to the heart of the other, and thus be able to fulfill their dreams. ?

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    Does the story end with the heart transplant or does the story begin with the heart transplant I can't tell from the way this is written. (Although I like this better than your first attempt)

    Does the story end with the heart transplant

    or

    does the story begin with the heart transplant

    I can’t tell from the way this is written. (Although I like this better than your first attempt)

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  3. Posted: April 16, 2020In:

    When a man?s romantic attentions are ignored by a woman for many years he lures her into a secret meeting with a messenger who proposes an idyllic rendezvous.

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    Is the man the bad guy? Because when you use the word lures, it makes me think this is some sort of trap, disguised as an idyllic rendezvous.

    Is the man the bad guy? Because when you use the word lures, it makes me think this is some sort of trap, disguised as an idyllic rendezvous.

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