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A misguided and jaded guidance counselor, depressed as he may be, deals with the unexpected end of his relationship. During a series of fumbles and misadventures, he tries to make a big splash back into the dating pool.
The actual beginning of the story is when the lead jumps back into the dating pool, The incident or cause, would be the unexpected break-up. You buried that way at the end of your logline.
The actual beginning of the story is when the lead jumps back into the dating pool, The incident or cause, would be the unexpected break-up. You buried that way at the end of your logline.
See lessA wandering biker clinging to his small hometown makes the unfortunate decision to rob a bank after a chance encounter with another disgruntled soul. He must deal with his decisions while on the run from both his accomplice and the police.
You might want to clarify a seeming contradiction:1: "A wandering biker," makes it seem like the lead is on the road roaming around2: "Clinging to his small hometown," make it seem like the lead has never left his hometown.And easy fix with a little clarification.
You might want to clarify a seeming contradiction:
1: “A wandering biker,” makes it seem like the lead is on the road roaming around
2: “Clinging to his small hometown,” make it seem like the lead has never left his hometown.
And easy fix with a little clarification.
See lessAfter his ex girlfriend had an unexpected pregnancy, a college student must develop a relationship with a porn actress to go on a road trip with him be their for the birth of his daughter.
"When he discovers his girlfriend from high school is about to give birth to his child in five days, an uptight college student's only hope of getting there in time is to hitch a ride with flamboyant (Transgender) Stripper who happens to be going his way."(I put Transgender in parenthesis because IRead more
“When he discovers his girlfriend from high school is about to give birth to his child in five days, an uptight college student’s only hope of getting there in time is to hitch a ride with flamboyant (Transgender) Stripper who happens to be going his way.”
(I put Transgender in parenthesis because I am thinking who would be the opposite of an uptight college student, but if you don’t like it leave it out.)
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