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After his ex girlfriend had an unexpected pregnancy, a college student must develop a relationship with a porn actress to go on a road trip with him be their for the birth of his daughter.
You are missing a key ingredient that would make this logline far more compelling and would be a natural part of the storyline: -A ticking clock- He has "One Weekend" or "he has Five days" Give us a specific ticking clock. The doctors are going to induce labor on Monday, and it's Thursday when someoRead more
You are missing a key ingredient that would make this logline far more compelling and would be a natural part of the storyline:
-A ticking clock-
He has “One Weekend” or “he has Five days” Give us a specific ticking clock.
The doctors are going to induce labor on Monday, and it’s Thursday when someone calls to tell him the news.
The lead has no car, very little money, and has to get across country by Monday night.
The only person that can help him is a Porn actress who happens to be going across the country as well.
Now you have an exciting situation to develop in your logline.
If you watch “Overnight Delivery”, with Paul Rudd and Reese Whitherspoon, Or “The Sure Thing” you will see that stories in which opposites go on the road together make for very fertile story soil.
See lessA pizza delivery driver that resents Superheroes, is inadvertently stuck protecting one when the worlds greatest supervillain arrives in his city during a typical afternoon shift.
"When the world's greatest superhero is critically wounded, a Pizza delivery guy, whose dad died when a superhero failed to save him, must keep the wounded crime-fighter hidden from the Supervillain who is out to finish the job."
“When the world’s greatest superhero is critically wounded, a Pizza delivery guy, whose dad died when a superhero failed to save him, must keep the wounded crime-fighter hidden from the Supervillain who is out to finish the job.”
See lessWhen a cavernous sinkhole opens up in a bustling city, a claustrophobic geologist leads a team of experts down to investigate, but when the sinkhole collapses, they find themselves trapped underground? and they?re not alone.
Since the bulk of the story takes place in the earth, you can actually drop the first part of the logline. Just start with the sinkhole and it will save logline space for other things. ----------------------------------------------- "When a claustrophobic geologist is trapped with his team while stuRead more
Since the bulk of the story takes place in the earth, you can actually drop the first part of the logline. Just start with the sinkhole and it will save logline space for other things.
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“When a claustrophobic geologist is trapped with his team while studying a sinkhole, The bookish professor must lead the team out from the depths of the earth all while, something in the dark seems to want them dead.”
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