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“A caregivers journal, with accounts of her experience, gets in the hand of a young person revealing many hidden secrets.”
The second attempt at the logline is better. It is written from the perspective of the lead character/couple. You might want to add stakes to your logline, but only if it can be said in a word or two. --- One more thing. I like putting what sets the story in motion as high as possible in the loglineRead more
The second attempt at the logline is better.
It is written from the perspective of the lead character/couple.
You might want to add stakes to your logline, but only if it can be said in a word or two.
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One more thing.
I like putting what sets the story in motion as high as possible in the logline, although that is a matter of taste. For instance:
When they unearth a forgotten journal, a young couple grappling with the aftermath of war and newfound responsibilities…
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Good luck with this!
An unemployed man realizes that the reason for divorces is not the relationship between husband and wife but between mother -in – law and daughter – in – law. Sensing this insight as a business model he starts counselling sessions for mother in law and daughter in law and it works for him. He becomes rich and finds love to marry. Everything looks great until he finds the same mother in law and daughter in law issues in his own marriage which he struggles to resolve .
Possible title: Heal Thyself (That comes from the saying, 'Physician Heal Thyself')
Possible title: Heal Thyself
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An adopted cat from the farm befriends an abused duck from a neighboring factory farm, risking disappointing her new owners as she desperately tries to prevent the sad fate of her feathered friend.
I can picture this story in my head from the logline.
I can picture this story in my head from the logline.
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