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After peeing on a stick, an aging party girl who has it all: the fiance, the house, the job .. and the crippling anxiety ? must decide if she?s ?old enough? to have her baby.
Interesting idea. I think it is missing an element, so I am going to add something not in your logline in order to try it out for size... Maybe you will like it, if not ignore it."When the stick turns blue, an aging party girl who's always refused to settle down;? the house, the job, the husband, thRead more
Interesting idea. I think it is missing an element, so I am going to add something not in your logline in order to try it out for size… Maybe you will like it, if not ignore it.
“When the stick turns blue, an aging party girl who’s always refused to settle down;? the house, the job, the husband, the who shebang, must now figure out how to grow up, whether she likes it or not.”
If you go with this idea, the lead character has “Never” grown-up, even though she has gotten older.?
See lessIn 24 hours she is forced into increasingly degrading and dangerous situations to save her loser boyfriend from a situation of his making only to realise she is better off with a broken heart than with a loser she loves.
What is the "Situation of his making" in which the lead character must saver her boyfriend from, because that is the inciting incident and the logline should begin with that. When her loser boyfriend loses a million dollars of mob money... When her loser boyfriend attacks a police officer and goes oRead more
What is the “Situation of his making” in which the lead character must saver her boyfriend from, because that is the inciting incident and the logline should begin with that.
When her loser boyfriend loses a million dollars of mob money…
When her loser boyfriend attacks a police officer and goes on the run…
When her loser boyfriend grows a man bun…
What specifically is the situation the lead character must save her loser boyfriend from.
See lessThree nerdy high-school students time travel back to 1940s Queens in attempt to stop future President of the United States Donald Trump from being born.
You should give your story an unexpected twist: "After they travel back in time and stop Trump from being born, three nerdy highschool students must set things aright when the new future turns out to be a dystopian nightmare."
You should give your story an unexpected twist:
“After they travel back in time and stop Trump from being born, three nerdy highschool students must set things aright when the new future turns out to be a dystopian nightmare.”
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