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A babysitter gets prank calls from a mysterious caller gets in a home invasion happens to be an child abductor who abused her in her childhood.
Here is a rough example: "When she discovers her mysterious prank caller is the same man who abused her as a child, a babysitter takes matters into her own hands to stop him before he abuses again."
Here is a rough example:
“When she discovers her mysterious prank caller is the same man who abused her as a child, a babysitter takes matters into her own hands to stop him before he abuses again.”
See lessA babysitter gets prank calls from a mysterious caller gets in a home invasion happens to be an child abductor who abused her in her childhood.
Better! However, I would at least hint at a goal in the logline. When she discovers the prank caller is the man who abused her as a child she would either want to get even/revenge or expose him. Maybe she just wants to destroy his life, Or perhaps he is abusing someone else and the lead wants to savRead more
Better! However, I would at least hint at a goal in the logline.
When she discovers the prank caller is the man who abused her as a child she would either want to get even/revenge or expose him. Maybe she just wants to destroy his life, Or perhaps he is abusing someone else and the lead wants to save the new victim.
Anyway, it’s an interesting concept!
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Story is conflict I am not seeing a conflict in the logline. If the lead character came from a long line of witch hunters, there would be a conflict If the witch was an evil witch who planned on eating children, there would be a conflict Where is the conflict? (and by where is the conflict I mean itRead more
Story is conflict
I am not seeing a conflict in the logline.
If the lead character came from a long line of witch hunters, there would be a conflict
If the witch was an evil witch who planned on eating children, there would be a conflict
Where is the conflict? (and by where is the conflict I mean it needs to be in the logline)
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