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Sex Magic, witchcraft, pornography charges, tabloid headlines ? In 1950s Sydney, Rosaleen Norton was extremely naughty, but did the scandals overshadow an artistic genius?
I would stay away from question marks in the logline. As for the rest, does the lead character have a goal? What does the lead character want?
I would stay away from question marks in the logline.
As for the rest, does the lead character have a goal? What does the lead character want?
See lessEngland 1962. Two teenage sisters, sibling rivals who argue over everything, go to an all-night party that launches their career as pop singers. Will they rocket to stardom or fizzle out like a defective cherry bomb?
I don't believe loglines are helped by writing them in the form of a question. They read too much like the old Batman show, "Is this the end for the dynamic duo, or will they live to fight another day..."? "Will they rocket to stardom, or will they fizzle out like a defective cherry bomb?"Tune in saRead more
I don’t believe loglines are helped by writing them in the form of a question. They read too much like the old Batman show, “Is this the end for the dynamic duo, or will they live to fight another day…”? “Will they rocket to stardom, or will they fizzle out like a defective cherry bomb?”
Tune in same bat time, same bat channel.
Instead of writing it as a question, you should give us the lead character’s goal then tell us what is standing in their way.
See lessAfter leaving her friend’s home, Fiona sees a bright white light and follows where it leads only getting entangled in the battle between angels and demons over humans, in the process finding out she is a mixed-breed of both supernatural beings.
When she discovers she is a mixed-breed of both angel and demon, a (give us a description of character) must (do this thing) in order to (Prevent this bad thing from happening)
When she discovers she is a mixed-breed of both angel and demon, a (give us a description of character) must (do this thing) in order to (Prevent this bad thing from happening)
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