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In the throes of the Iraq war, a flight medic and his crew risk their lives to save injured soldiers and civilians alike.
Just curious, but what is the hook of the story? Because as written it could also say "In the throes of the Iraq war, a flight medic and his crew do their job." In other words, this is an interesting setting and situation but it is missing the hook. The thing that sets it apart and makes people sitRead more
Just curious, but what is the hook of the story? Because as written it could also say “In the throes of the Iraq war, a flight medic and his crew do their job.”
In other words, this is an interesting setting and situation but it is missing the hook. The thing that sets it apart and makes people sit up and take notice.
That doesn’t mean your story doesn’t have a hook, it just means whatever that hook is, it should be added to the logline.
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"After the tragic death of (Her father?) a disgraced athlete partners with a childhood friend to scam the insurance company which puts them on the wrong end of a revenge plot by (A ruthless insurance agent?)"
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