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An America Indian and her drinking buddy from another star system saves abducted humans from hostile ETs then they save humanity from their most formidable foe. . . . Humans!
While you have the logline under SciFi, it feels like a comedy, so I will attempt a comedic logline as way of an example. However, if it misses the mark just ignore it: -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Read more
While you have the logline under SciFi, it feels like a comedy, so I will attempt a comedic logline as way of an example. However, if it misses the mark just ignore it:
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“When her grandfather is abducted by evil extraterrestrials, an American Indian and her alien drinking buddy put aside their beer, set to the stars and attempt to rescue poor Grampy before he is probed in a very uncomfortable way…”
See lessAn America Indian and her drinking buddy from another star system saves abducted humans from hostile ETs then they save humanity from their most formidable foe. . . . Humans!
This logline attempt is better than previous attempts. Your logline does have two goals however, I would probably stick with one goal in the logline. Also, it would help if the person who is kidnapped by evil aliens is someone the American Indian cares about. That way the mission to save the 'humansRead more
This logline attempt is better than previous attempts.
Your logline does have two goals however, I would probably stick with one goal in the logline.
Also, it would help if the person who is kidnapped by evil aliens is someone the American Indian cares about. That way the mission to save the ‘humans’ would be more personal.
For instance, when John McClain sets out to save the Takahashi building, it’s to save his wife. In the process, he saves everyone else, but he has a personal motivation.
Anyway, the logline is heading in the right direction.
See lessIn a remote Helmand village, a Special Forces team struggles against the Taliban and faces skeptical locals as they try to secure ground and transfer power to the Afghans.
"When he and his team are sent to a remote Helmand village to? secure free elections for the people,? a special forces captain must fight off Taliban forces determine to stop the vote."
“When he and his team are sent to a remote Helmand village to? secure free elections for the people,? a special forces captain must fight off Taliban forces determine to stop the vote.”
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