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A Vegas waitress tripled in size — now a showroom headliner — falls for the scientist who accidentally enlarged her. She vows to save him when he’s kidnapped by her vengeful ex, a blackmailing mobster and a haughty former showgirl.
"When the scientist she fell in love with is kidnapped,? a 30-foot-tall showgirl rampages through vegas, and the national guard in order to save her lover from the mobster who took him."
“When the scientist she fell in love with is kidnapped,? a 30-foot-tall showgirl rampages through vegas, and the national guard in order to save her lover from the mobster who took him.”
See lessA bible schoolteacher is being beat to death by two cops, if he doesn’t fight back, he will be killed.
"When the African preacher they brutalized begins using powers, two racist cops must escape the inhuman being or lose their souls forever."?
“When the African preacher they brutalized begins using powers, two racist cops must escape the inhuman being or lose their souls forever.”?
See lessWhen a young woman blissfully in love, climbs the Swiss Alps to meet her boyfriend, she is unexpectedly dumped and must overcome heartbreak to start again.
"One?must never place a loaded rifle on the?stage if it isn't going to go off." --Mr. Sulu-- (Or was it Chekhov?)You set up your logline with the lead character climbing the Swiss Alps. This is very interesting.Then you do nothing with it. Once the lead is dumped she simply must overcome her heartbrRead more
“One?must never place a loaded rifle on the?stage if it isn’t going to go off.” –Mr. Sulu– (Or was it Chekhov?)
You set up your logline with the lead character climbing the Swiss Alps. This is very interesting.
Then you do nothing with it. Once the lead is dumped she simply must overcome her heartbreak.
It is anti-climactic to put the Swiss Alps at the beginning of the story, then not use them in the second act as something the lead must overcome. Especially since it is the “Alps,” part of the logline that will hook the reader.
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