1. Posted: July 23, 2019In:

    After a homeless toddler sells his beloved cuddly toy for millions of dollars and lives a life like a king with hundreds of toys, he realizes that money is not the same as happiness, so he goes out to find the owner to get his toy back.

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    For me, where I loose suspension of disbelief, is the idea that a toddler (A baby who still crawls on all fours, or has just learned to walk) would have any concept of money.

    For me, where I loose suspension of disbelief, is the idea that a toddler (A baby who still crawls on all fours, or has just learned to walk) would have any concept of money.

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  2. Posted: July 20, 2019In:

    A disillusioned Catholic priest, the illegitimate son of a billionaire becomes the first American Pope, overturning Rome?s age-old canons. The first Pope to resign in 600 years, he abdicates the pomp and power of the papacy, to return to the woman he loves.

    Richiev Singularity

    Is this the set-up of the story, the story starting when he returns to the woman he loves and about how he goes about life after being pope Or is this the whole story. In which case the story ends with him returning to the woman he loves. If it is the second, then I would leave out the part about abRead more

    Is this the set-up of the story, the story starting when he returns to the woman he loves and about how he goes about life after being pope

    Or is this the whole story. In which case the story ends with him returning to the woman he loves.

    If it is the second, then I would leave out the part about abdicating the papacy, because you shouldn’t give away the end of the movie in your logline.

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  3. Posted: July 19, 2019In:

    The mixed breed Believing to be a human being and having a normal life with her ?parents?, Fiona coming back from seeing her best friend off took a new road to her home only to be got up between the above world and underworld clashes over the human race thereby finding out she was not a human but a mixed breed of both angel and demon and must choose the path to follow that will decide the fate of the human race.

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    There are a lot of words in this logline,? a lot of set up, and yet I can't picture the plot in my head. What is the actual story about? Because right now the only thing the lead character does is 'choose', and I don't see how that will take up two hours of screen time? Something along the lines of:Read more

    There are a lot of words in this logline,? a lot of set up, and yet I can’t picture the plot in my head.

    What is the actual story about?

    Because right now the only thing the lead character does is ‘choose’, and I don’t see how that will take up two hours of screen time?

    Something along the lines of: “When she discovers she is half-angel, half-demon, a (Give a description) must (Do this thing) or (This bad thing) will happen to the human race.”

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