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After an outsider college clique finds that a young magic poet can write love poems that make every woman fall in love with them, they kidnap the guy, only to find out that real love has to be mutual.
You need a lead character, And the lead character needs to be in head over heels in love. That love should mean the entire world to the lead character And also, for this logline/story to work, the audience needs to feel that love. It has to come across Then the audience will sort of understand why tRead more
You need a lead character, And the lead character needs to be in head over heels in love. That love should mean the entire world to the lead character
And also, for this logline/story to work, the audience needs to feel that love. It has to come across
Then the audience will sort of understand why the lead character who is love-struck might kidnap the poet.
Because there is a real-world consequence for kidnapping.? You have to make it believable that someone is so in love they risk years in prison just to win the love of their life.
Also, don’t tell us the ending in the logline.
See lessA bumptious young decorator inherits her uncle?s rental properties and must contend with city code enforcers while expanding her rental empire and becoming L.A.?s newest Slumlord.
BTW, I actually had to look up the word 'bumptious' (That is usually not a good sign) synonyms: conceited???arrogant ?? self-assertive???full of oneself???puffed up???swollen-headed???pompous???overbearing???(self-)opinionated???cocky???swaggering???strutting??
BTW, I actually had to look up the word ‘bumptious’ (That is usually not a good sign)
A bumptious young decorator inherits her uncle?s rental properties and must contend with city code enforcers while expanding her rental empire and becoming L.A.?s newest Slumlord.
Do people actually aspire to be slum lords? Seems like a weird goal. Not saying she can't, not even saying this won't be a fun story... just saying it seems weird. Possible title: Slum Lord Millionaire
Do people actually aspire to be slum lords? Seems like a weird goal.
Not saying she can’t, not even saying this won’t be a fun story… just saying it seems weird.
Possible title: Slum Lord Millionaire
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