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A quirky, slightly neurotic writer must overcome years of social anxiety and isolation in order to win the heart of the man she loves.
In the movie, 'Bridget Jone's Diary', Bridget; A quirky, slightly neurotic woman finds love when she realizes true love is when the person loves you just as you are. In this version of your logline, you imply that the in order to be loved the lead must change who she is. I didn't get that from yourRead more
In the movie, ‘Bridget Jone’s Diary’, Bridget; A quirky, slightly neurotic woman finds love when she realizes true love is when the person loves you just as you are.
In this version of your logline, you imply that the in order to be loved the lead must change who she is.
I didn’t get that from your first logline attempt so I assume it is an unintended consequence of your re-write.
It is important for a character to grow, but the growth is usually a consequence of the action and not the reason for the action.
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