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When a portal opens up for demons to escape Hell, the devil?s son must go to earth to round up the demons and deliver the one who made the portal to Yahweh before He cleans up the mess, sending every demon and creature into oblivion along with the son, if he?s still on earth.
The last logline attempt was better.But beyond that, there is still one problem. You haven't given the reader a tangible reason why the son of the devil would want to save humanity.This is why I suggested a ticking clock. He is told by (Perhaps) the Angel Michael, that he must clean up the mess or eRead more
The last logline attempt was better.
But beyond that, there is still one problem. You haven’t given the reader a tangible reason why the son of the devil would want to save humanity.
This is why I suggested a ticking clock. He is told by (Perhaps) the Angel Michael, that he must clean up the mess or else.
However, your story seems to be about more than that. In previous loglines, you have hinted that the son of the devil cares about humanity. But why he cares has never come through.
You need a love interest.
The son of the Devil is in love with a human. A human woman that touched his heart. Now he must stop the breach and save humanity if he is to save her.
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My only question would be, Once your lead decides to bury the body, what is standing in the way?
My only question would be, Once your lead decides to bury the body, what is standing in the way?
See lessWhen a Texas cotton farmer’s land stops yielding crops, he teams up with an old friend to distribute VHS pornography tapes; leaving his family and slipping into a world of depravity and greed to become the undisputed King of Pornography in Texas. (1980)
Does the lead character have a goal? Something the audience can relate to? In other words, what does the lead character want?
Does the lead character have a goal? Something the audience can relate to?
In other words, what does the lead character want?
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