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After a king dies a mysterious death, the king’s seductive influential adviser calls the impressionable son to the throne to assume control, unaware that he is secretly investigating his father’s death to make sure he isn’t next to risk the fall of the kingdom.
You switch PoV in your logline.It begins from the adviser point of view, then switches to the young prince's view.A logline should be told from one point of view, and that is the PoV of the lead characterWhich brings us to the next important question...Who is the lead character? The kid or the advisRead more
You switch PoV in your logline.
It begins from the adviser point of view, then switches to the young prince’s view.
A logline should be told from one point of view, and that is the PoV of the lead character
Which brings us to the next important question…
Who is the lead character? The kid or the adviser.
See lessA hired thief steals a magic relic awakening 12 mercenary monks; all will team up to keep the relic away from an ancient power hungry Templar.
I think the previous logline was a better attempt. A lead character needs a goal. In the previous logline attempt, the lead had the goal of saving his son.
I think the previous logline was a better attempt. A lead character needs a goal. In the previous logline attempt, the lead had the goal of saving his son.
See lessWhen the son of a Vietnam Vet turned thief is stolen from him, he must locate an ancient relic that could save his son, but give control to a 700-year-old slighted Templar.
"When a 700-year-old Templar kidnaps his son, a Vietnam Vet, turned thief is given 10 days to steal an ancient relic from the Cairo museum if he is to save his son."----------------------------------I added 'Cairo Museum' but you could just switch it out for whatever difficult place the lead must inRead more
“When a 700-year-old Templar kidnaps his son, a Vietnam Vet, turned thief is given 10 days to steal an ancient relic from the Cairo museum if he is to save his son.”
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I added ‘Cairo Museum’ but you could just switch it out for whatever difficult place the lead must infiltrate to steal the amulet.