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  1. Posted: February 6, 2019In: Horror

    After a toxic incident occurs during an online gaming stream, the streamer and his close circle of friends are targeted in real life as the streamer attempts to find out who’s behind the attacks.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 7, 2019 at 6:00 am

    "When his online role-playing game collapses in a huge argument, a high school geek must turn investigator as the group members begin to be murdered one by one."

    “When his online role-playing game collapses in a huge argument, a high school geek must turn investigator as the group members begin to be murdered one by one.”

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  2. Posted: February 5, 2019In: Action

    A millionaire buys a 77-year-old plane. The broken machine will be restored for five years. After that, he and his son fly on historic routes around the world.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 5, 2019 at 3:44 am

    Story is conflict. The logline, as written has no conflict, thus no story. Who or what is standing in the way of the lead character achieving his goal?

    Story is conflict.

    The logline, as written has no conflict, thus no story.

    Who or what is standing in the way of the lead character achieving his goal?

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  3. Posted: February 3, 2019In: Action

    A man, noted as the young president of America, kills himself off to go undercover to stop who is trying to ruin his plans for rebuilding America when he finds the death of his VP’s death a hard one to execute and even harder to explain.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 4, 2019 at 2:30 pm

    A man, noted as the young president of America, kills himself off to go undercover to stop who is trying to ruin his plans for rebuilding America when he finds the death of his VP?s death a hard one to execute and even harder to explain.1: Is he the president or is he just noted as the president.2:Read more

    A man, noted as the young president of America, kills himself off to go undercover to stop who is trying to ruin his plans for rebuilding America when he finds the death of his VP?s death a hard one to execute and even harder to explain.

    1: Is he the president or is he just noted as the president.
    2: Does he kill himself? (As your logline says) Or does he fake his death? (And if he does kill himself, how does he go undercover if he is dead?)
    3: You talk about the death of the VP but now say the VP is alive. This is confusing.
    4: If the death of the VP is not the inciting incident, then what is?

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