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A feeble and weak-kneed man must find a way out when he is forced to drive and help a criminal on the run, while being chased by the police who believes him to be an accomplice.
When he's forced at gunpoint to drive a criminal on the run, a timid uber diver?must appease the criminal while trying to find a way to escape, all while being chased by the police who believe he's an accomplice."?
When he’s forced at gunpoint to drive a criminal on the run, a timid uber diver?must appease the criminal while trying to find a way to escape, all while being chased by the police who believe he’s an accomplice.”?
See lessA broken woman finds herself married to a highly respected deacon, but must now escape a life of abuse and ultimately find her own true spiritual identity.
The story concept is good.And this logline attempt is better than the last, more condensed.However, does the story begin with the lead character leaving the well-respected decon (and the story is about the lead character finding herself?)or does the story end with her finally calling it quits on herRead more
The story concept is good.
And this logline attempt is better than the last, more condensed.
However, does the story begin with the lead character leaving the well-respected decon (and the story is about the lead character finding herself?)
See lessor does the story end with her finally calling it quits on her marriage to go find herself? (The story being all the events that lead up to her walking out on her marriage?)
When a man whose jobs is to take on identities suffers a malfunction with his new one, the man struggles with his identity vs the identity is suppose to be under, which could reveal the status and whereabouts of a new complicated nuclear sub.
What malfunction does he suffer? That is very vague.As a result, I have no idea what your story is actually about.I'll try to create a logline, but obviously, yours will be different.------------------------------------------------------------------------------When a nuclear sub goes missing, an undRead more
What malfunction does he suffer? That is very vague.
As a result, I have no idea what your story is actually about.
I’ll try to create a logline, but obviously, yours will be different.
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When a nuclear sub goes missing, an undercover agent must (Impersonate a powerful weapons buyer) to discover its location, but complications?arise when (he falls for his mark and accidentally reveals his true identity)
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So if the leads job is to recover the missing submarine. Then the inciting incident would be when the sub goes missing…?(When a nuclear sub goes missing)
…Suffers a malfunction with his new one, the man struggles?with his identity vs the identity?he is supposed to be under.??but complications?arise when (he falls for his mark and accidentally reveals his true identity)
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So his job is to find the sub but he suffers a malfunction because he falls for his mark. The malfunction?being; he reveals his true identity.
Now Malfunction isn’t vague, we know exactly what that malfunction is and know what the story is about.