1. Posted: April 20, 2022In:

    When an interdimensional rupture unravels reality, an unlikely hero must channel her newfound powers to fight bizarre and bewildering dangers from the multiverse as the fate of the world hangs in the balance.

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    What is the lead character's actual goal? Close the rift? Defeat the being that opened the rift (If there was one) Stop a specific monster from coming through the rift? In other words, what does winning look like on the screen?

    What is the lead character’s actual goal?

    Close the rift?
    Defeat the being that opened the rift (If there was one)
    Stop a specific monster from coming through the rift?

    In other words, what does winning look like on the screen?

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  2. Posted: April 18, 2022In:

    A weary teen is followed by a mystifying dark creature on her way back home and decides to confront him.

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    When a weary teen confronts the dark creature that is following her, she must... (Do this thing if she is to, solve this problem)

    When a weary teen confronts the dark creature that is following her, she must… (Do this thing if she is to, solve this problem)

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  3. Posted: April 18, 2022In:

    A charismatic aristocrat returns home and enters a marriage of convenience with a reserved London lawyer to save his failing family estate.

    Richiev Singularity

    Your logline kinda answers itself. Problem: the lead character must save his family estate. Answer: marries a reserved London Lawyer Problems solved. Where is the conflict and who is standing in the lead character's way?

    Your logline kinda answers itself.

    Problem: the lead character must save his family estate.
    Answer: marries a reserved London Lawyer

    Problems solved.

    Where is the conflict and who is standing in the lead character’s way?

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