1. Posted: September 24, 2018In:

    When abducted because of his secret, a clumsy teenager with acidic semen must save himself and a porn actress from the set and crew of a deranged snuff film director.

    Richiev Singularity

    Possible title: Blow Hard (Sorry, couldn't help it)

    Possible title: Blow Hard (Sorry, couldn’t help it)

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  2. Posted: September 25, 2018In:

    After a disastrous test screening of his latest movie, a hot-headed and volatile Hollywood film director holds the audience hostage with a shotgun and forces them to provide honest feedback.

    Richiev Singularity

    Is the director the lead character, because from your logline it seems that is the case, however, the lead character doesn't sound sympathetic. If the story is told from the point of view of one of the hostages, then the logline should be written from their point of view.

    Is the director the lead character, because from your logline it seems that is the case, however, the lead character doesn’t sound sympathetic.

    If the story is told from the point of view of one of the hostages, then the logline should be written from their point of view.

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  3. Posted: September 24, 2018In:

    REVISED: When her beloved grandma passes away, an estranged young woman must find a way of fulfilling her grandma?s last wish while struggling to reconnect with her dysfunctional family at the funeral.

    Richiev Singularity

    btw; 'Persona Non Grata' would be a good title for your script

    btw; ‘Persona Non Grata’ would be a good title for your script

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