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When her alcoholic father breaks his leg and ends up at the hospital, the 11-year old girl must find someone to stay with or she?ll be placed in foster care.
"When an uncaring social worker threatens to take her away from her alcoholic father,? a determined pre-teen must pass off a local homeless man as her uncle or be sent to foster care, never to see her dad again."
“When an uncaring social worker threatens to take her away from her alcoholic father,? a determined pre-teen must pass off a local homeless man as her uncle or be sent to foster care, never to see her dad again.”
See lessAfter falling in love a doctor while recovering in a hospital a woman find out she’s in coma. Now she must decide, will she wake up and go back to her life or will she stay?
This is going to come out of left field:---------------------------------------------"After her mother falls into a coma,? a?shattered daughter must use an experimental?treatment to enter her mom's brain to convince her to?give up the fantasy world she has created and return to the real world ."----Read more
This is going to come out of left field:
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“After her mother falls into a coma,? a?shattered daughter must use an experimental?treatment to enter her mom’s brain to convince her to?give up the fantasy world she has created and return to the real world .”
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I added a daughter because you have created a situation. The situation is, a woman is in a coma and can’t decide whether to live in the fantasy she has created or come back to the real world. I have placed a lead character with a strong goal into that situation; A daughter who must convince her mother to give up the fantasy and return to the real world or else be lost forever.
However, this is so different from what is in your logline I understand you may not want to go this direction.
See lessMichelle a small town girl from Florida moves to Chicago to her education. Struggling under the burden of paying for college. While working at a local bar she befriend a customer Zeus. After talking for a while Zeus offers her a way to make plenty of money. Michelle soon finds herself embroiled with the Russian mafia, lost in world of sex and drugs she must fight to get out.
"When she becomes entice into the seedy world of sex and drugs, while buried under the burden of student loans, a med student must fight her way out because while the college debt was bad, the cure will kill her."
“When she becomes entice into the seedy world of sex and drugs, while buried under the burden of student loans, a med student must fight her way out because while the college debt was bad, the cure will kill her.”
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