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Ohene an impoverished and obsessed fellow lures friends to start a small film crew, lack of equipment makes him steal, he gets caught and he flee to abate the shame. His friends by thorough search locate him and imperate him to lead them to a film contest that makes him clear the wrong notion of others about him through his victory.
What is the lead character's goal? Is the lead's goal to make a film? or Is the lead's goal to win a film contest? Also, what event sets the story in motion? You say the lead character is obsessed (I assume?he is obsessed to make a movie) However, why didn't the lead make a film last year? Why didn'Read more
What is the lead character’s goal?
Is the lead’s goal to make a film? or
Is the lead’s goal to win a film contest?
Also, what event sets the story in motion?
See lessYou say the lead character is obsessed (I assume?he is obsessed to make a movie)
However, why didn’t the lead make a film last year?
Why didn’t the lead wait until next year?
What event made the lead take action today? (Instead of yesterday or tomorrow)
A brutal ex-sheriff returns to the small town where she bullied others as a child to investigate a string of seemingly random suicides.
I think the logline works. If there is any connection to the sheriff and the suicide that set's the story in motion I would mention the specifics of it. Because ultimately the 'seemingly random suicides'?is the only vague part of the logline. However, this is pretty solid overall.
I think the logline works.
If there is any connection to the sheriff and the suicide that set’s the story in motion I would mention the specifics of it.
Because ultimately the ‘seemingly random suicides’?is the only vague part of the logline.
However, this is pretty solid overall.
See lessA has-been country singer reunites with his estranged reckless 16-year old daughter on his way to a comeback concert.
Luckily I have read previous attempts so I understand there is more going on. Because in this version of the logline there is no conflict. Story is conflict, and conflict is the cornerstone of any logline.
Luckily I have read previous attempts so I understand there is more going on.
See lessBecause in this version of the logline there is no conflict.
Story is conflict, and conflict is the cornerstone of any logline.