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  1. Posted: October 2, 2018In: Examples

    When a drunk jingle writer repeatedly gets into bar fights, judge order him to anger management and mentor a trouble youth with a beautiful natural singing voice, if he doesn’t he will lose his income, family and go to jail.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on October 2, 2018 at 10:24 am

    "After a judge orders him to community service, an alcoholic jingle writer is forced to tutor a troubled and annoying singer with a beautiful voice, but failure in his duty and he will go directly to jail and not pass go." ----- Possible title: Passing Go (I changed it to community service because IRead more

    “After a judge orders him to community service, an alcoholic jingle writer is forced to tutor a troubled and annoying singer with a beautiful voice, but failure in his duty and he will go directly to jail and not pass go.”
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    Possible title: Passing Go

    (I changed it to community service because I don’t think a judge would allow someone with an anger problem around kids)

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  2. Posted: October 2, 2018In: Examples

    When his accidental time-travelling disrupts his parents’ first meeting, a teenager must get them to fall in love, before a historical lightning can reignite his time machine.

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    Added an answer on October 2, 2018 at 4:25 am

    In Version 2, instead of saying, 'so that he can exist in the present' you should say it with a little more weight, something like 'or be erased from existence forever' Anyway, a good example of Back to the Future.

    In Version 2, instead of saying, ‘so that he can exist in the present’ you should say it with a little more weight, something like ‘or be erased from existence forever’

    Anyway, a good example of Back to the Future.

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  3. Posted: October 1, 2018In: Drama

    When a struggling repo agent gets arrested, she is rescued and recruited by a mysterious business woman that specializes in acquiring and selling exotic, hard to find, mythical items to the highest bidder.

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    Added an answer on October 1, 2018 at 1:42 pm

    You have a situation but you have not told us what's the lead character's goal. ----- "When she's recruited by a mysterious businesswoman to acquire?the Holy Grail, and ex-repo agent?must..." (Then tell us what she must do)

    You have a situation but you have not told us what’s the lead character’s goal.
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    “When she’s recruited by a mysterious businesswoman to acquire?the Holy Grail, and ex-repo agent?must…” (Then tell us what she must do)

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