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When her estranged country singing father witnesses a murder, the teenage ballet dancer must save him from getting killed.
The goal is much stronger in this version of the logline. Maybe you could re-incorporates some of the elements of your last logline into this version. The part where the girl must reluctantly go on the road with her father.
The goal is much stronger in this version of the logline.
See lessMaybe you could re-incorporates some of the elements of your last logline into this version.
The part where the girl must reluctantly go on the road with her father.
A rookie female detective, out to prove herself, is tasked with protecting a single mother and her son when a serial killer learns that the young boy claims to be the re-incarnation of one of his victims, and tries to kill him again.
This is tougher than I thought it would be. Here is an attempt: ----------------------------------------------------------- "When a boy claims to be targeted by a serial killer who believes he's the murderer's latest victim re-incarnated, a reluctant rookie cop is tasked to babysit the duo, but soonRead more
This is tougher than I thought it would be. Here is an attempt:
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“When a boy claims to be targeted by a serial killer who believes he’s the murderer’s latest victim re-incarnated, a reluctant rookie cop is tasked to babysit the duo, but soon the protection duty turns deadly.”
A survivor in an apocalyptic world keeps experiencing visions when they encounter new people and places while travelling to “Haven”, where they believe they would find a place to belong.
1: If the visions set the story in motion, then they should lead to a goal that matches.2: If the goal is to find a "Haven" then you need to add what prompted them to leave 'at this time' and search for it.Here is an example that incorporates both at once:---------Inspired by visions of a mysteriousRead more
1: If the visions set the story in motion, then they should lead to a goal that matches.
2: If the goal is to find a “Haven” then you need to add what prompted them to leave ‘at this time’ and search for it.
Here is an example that incorporates both at once:
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Inspired by visions of a mysterious paradise, the leader of a wandering tribe leads his clan across the post-apocalyptic?wasteland in order to find the lost Utopia.”