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  1. Posted: September 17, 2018In: Comedy

    When her mother goes into rehab, the 16 year old girl must go with her father, a country singer, who is temporarily released from jail to do a tour.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 18, 2018 at 4:37 pm

    Do people get temporarily released from jail?

    Do people get temporarily released from jail?

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  2. Posted: September 18, 2018In: Noir

    A man makes numerous phone calls trying to negotiate his own safety while travelling to his gangster boss to confess his failure, finally having to settle for saving his family from revenge.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 18, 2018 at 4:35 pm

    There are a couple things you could do to improve this logline 1: You say 'a man' but that only cuts down the possibilities from 8 billion to about 4 billion. Is there a personality trait you could give him so we have more information. Adding this will help your logline. 2: You say 'confess his failRead more

    There are a couple things you could do to improve this logline

    1: You say ‘a man’ but that only cuts down the possibilities from 8 billion to about 4 billion. Is there a personality trait you could give him so we have more information. Adding this will help your logline.

    2: You say ‘confess his failure’ but don’t tell us what that failure is. Did he fail to kill a guy? Did he fail a drug exchange for money? Did he fail to return his bosses cable boxes after his boss switched TV providers?

    3: Finally, if you have leeway?to do a?rewrite of the script. I would make it so the mob boss already has his family. (However, if that is not possible that’s cool)

    Anyway, I like the concept, this seems like a good movie short that could be done on a shoestring budget.

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  3. Posted: September 17, 2018In: Action

    A retired cop who?s vowed never to hold another gun must rescue her troubled son from a heavily-armed weapons cult.

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    Added an answer on September 18, 2018 at 3:40 am

    There is a lot of stuff happening in this logline. However, why doesn't the former police officer call the authorities? Also, how does she know her son is about to be executed? Was it announced in the secret cults newsletter?

    There is a lot of stuff happening in this logline.
    However, why doesn’t the former police officer call the authorities?
    Also, how does she know her son is about to be executed? Was it announced in the secret cults newsletter?

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