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When murders occur in a secluded swingers resort, an estranged couple must work together in order to stop a maniac killer determined to punish the promiscuous.
One more thing,? many times a writer will personalize the story for the main character. For instance, the person killed will be someone the lead character cares about Another way is the lead character is somehow implicated in the murder and thus must prove their innocence. Just curious?if in your stRead more
One more thing,? many times a writer will personalize the story for the main character.
For instance, the person killed will be someone the lead character cares about
Another way is the lead character is somehow implicated in the murder and thus must prove their innocence.
Just curious?if in your story there was a personal connection between the lead character the victims?
See lessWhen murders occur in a secluded swingers resort, an estranged couple must work together in order to stop a maniac killer determined to punish the promiscuous.
The good point is; I get the gist of the movie from your logline and I believe that is most important.I will give a couple attempts just to see if you like them, using your logline?as the baseline:-----------------------------"When a serial killer strikes a secluded swingers retreat, a couple on theRead more
The good point is; I get the gist of the movie from your logline and I believe that is most important.
See lessI will give a couple attempts just to see if you like them, using your logline?as the baseline:
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“When a serial killer strikes a secluded swingers retreat, a couple on the brink of divorce must work together?to stop the killer hell-bent on punishing the promiscuous.”
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With a touch of Irony:
“When a serial killer strikes a secluded swingers retreat, a couple on the brink of divorce must work together?to stop the killer hell-bent on punishing the promiscuous, before they kill each other.”
When a contract killer murders the wrong person, he must hire a body guard to protect himself from his own employer.
One more thing, in the movie "The hitman's?bodyguard" The goal was to get the hitman to a trial, to put away some very bad people. A proactive goal. This would be a good example of what I was talking about above; about a pro-active goal for your lead character.
One more thing, in the movie “The hitman’s?bodyguard” The goal was to get the hitman to a trial, to put away some very bad people. A proactive goal. This would be a good example of what I was talking about above; about a pro-active goal for your lead character.
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