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A woman finds a phone connected to the future, she is tasked by people to do a series of increasingly extreme tasks in an attempt to fix their present, or it may be her latest bout of mental illness.
oops, I mean after the second comma
oops, I mean after the second comma
See lessA woman finds a phone connected to the future, she is tasked by people to do a series of increasingly extreme tasks in an attempt to fix their present, or it may be her latest bout of mental illness.
A solid story idea. You could probably drop everything after the comma.
A solid story idea.
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A priest kidnaps an atheist writer and tortures him until he believes in God or one of them dies in the process.
I don't agree that the lead character is the one who changes the most. (If you are writing a story, good writing advice is, the lead character should change the most, and you should use that advice when plotting both your internal and external story.) I believe the lead character is the one who oppoRead more
I don’t agree that the lead character is the one who changes the most.
(If you are writing a story, good writing advice is, the lead character should change the most, and you should use that advice when plotting both your internal and external story.)
I believe the lead character is the one who opposes the antagonist in the central conflict of the story.
The crazed priest’s goal in this story is to convert the atheist. The kidnapping is just a means to an end. Therefore the central conflict is the battle of wills between the crazed priest and the atheist writer, which would make the lead character the atheist writer.
But obviously, that is just an opinion since I don’t actually know the full story.
Anyway, you have some great insights, and in the end, you may be right about who is the lead character.
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