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A priest kidnaps an atheist writer and tortures him until he believes in God or one of them dies in the process.
It really depends on who the lead character is. The logline, as written makes it seem like the crazed priest is the lead character That seems weird so both Karel and I suggested the logline be written from the person who is kidnapped However, your suggestion that the ex-lover/detective be the lead cRead more
It really depends on who the lead character is.
The logline, as written makes it seem like the crazed priest is the lead character
That seems weird so both Karel and I suggested the logline be written from the person who is kidnapped
However, your suggestion that the ex-lover/detective be the lead character and the priest/victim dynamic should be the ‘B’ story seems interesting as well.
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The word 'His' seems to come out of nowhere, I get the gist of what you are saying in the logline but it is still written in a slightly confusing way. When her workaholic mom... (So we are talking about a girl young enough to still be living with her mom) His son Alex (11) (This is the part that conRead more
The word ‘His’ seems to come out of nowhere, I get the gist of what you are saying in the logline but it is still written in a slightly confusing way.
When her workaholic mom… (So we are talking about a girl young enough to still be living with her mom)
His son Alex (11) (This is the part that confuses me, who is the ‘His’ that has a son?)
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"When he's kidnaped by a Catholic priest, an atheist writer must discover a way to escape all while the crazed father attempts to torture him into believing in God."
“When he’s kidnaped by a Catholic priest, an atheist writer must discover a way to escape all while the crazed father attempts to torture him into believing in God.”
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