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When a group of girls are expelled from their high school for an explicit group chat they created, they make it their goal to get back at the snitch who got them caught.
Who is the lead character?
Who is the lead character?
See lessWhen a local hotel hires a member on staff to be a ?professional sleeper? to test their bedding, he becomes haunted by a rusty old mattress.
This is another logline where your premise could work but the logline doesn't. Stories have to have an internal logic to them. It defies logic that a hotel would have enough money to hire a professional sleeper, (At 10 dollars an hour that is 80 dollars a night at least) but allows guest to sleep onRead more
This is another logline where your premise could work but the logline doesn’t.
Stories have to have an internal logic to them.
It defies logic that a hotel would have enough money to hire a professional sleeper, (At 10 dollars an hour that is 80 dollars a night at least) but allows guest to sleep on a rusty-old-mattress they could replace for a couple hundred bucks. (or cheaper if they got it wholesale)
So logically, if the hotel cared enough to hire a professional sleeper, they would have already changed out the rusty old mattress
See lessWhen a young man comes across a computer pop-up ad that informs him he will be killed in 3 days, he must do what he can to save himself.
How does he know the ad is intended for him? How does he know it is real? This premise can work, but the logline as written has a problem as I don't see how a normal person would change their whole life around because of a pop-up ad.
How does he know the ad is intended for him?
How does he know it is real?
This premise can work, but the logline as written has a problem as I don’t see how a normal person would change their whole life around because of a pop-up ad.
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