1. Posted: June 23, 2018In:

    A young boy in high school and his goofy uncle, a washed-up actor, try and become the next big stand-up comedy duo.

    Richiev Singularity

    For a story, you need conflict and the conflict should be in the logline. There is no conflict here. What stands in their way?

    For a story, you need conflict and the conflict should be in the logline.

    There is no conflict here.
    What stands in their way?

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  2. Posted: June 23, 2018In:

    At a diversity leadership convention, a straight male accidentally walks into the women?s restroom..

    Richiev Singularity

    This is a situation not a story. In a story you have an event, such as you have described, this leads to your character having a goal and something standing in the way of the goal. What is your lead characters goal? What is standing in the lead characters way?

    This is a situation not a story.
    In a story you have an event, such as you have described, this leads to your character having a goal and something standing in the way of the goal.

    What is your lead characters goal?
    What is standing in the lead characters way?

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  3. Posted: June 23, 2018In:

    When the ultimate betrayal comes to surface, 8 friends will become enemies and only 1 will be left standing.

    Richiev Singularity

    If the betrayal is a big reveal at the end of the movie, then it is true, you should not reveal?it in the logline. However,?we still need a specific event in the logline that sets the story in motion.

    If the betrayal is a big reveal at the end of the movie, then it is true, you should not reveal?it in the logline.

    However,?we still need a specific event in the logline that sets the story in motion.

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