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  1. Posted: June 20, 2018In: Thriller

    When a mobbed-up madam sends a prostitute up to the estate of a sadistic, reclusive billionaire, it sets off a chain reaction that has her and those in her organized crime circle running for their lives.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 20, 2018 at 4:21 pm

    You have action but you are missing a goal for the lead character.

    You have action but you are missing a goal for the lead character.

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  2. Posted: June 18, 2018In: Horror

    REVISION // When zombies slaughter their classmates and the teacher drives off with the bus, a shy film geek must unite the survivors and use all his movie knowledge to keep everyone alive until help arrives.

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    Added an answer on June 19, 2018 at 3:20 pm

    "When zombies attack during his school field trip, A film buff must use his horror film knowledge if he is to defeat the horde and lead his class to safety."

    “When zombies attack during his school field trip, A film buff must use his horror film knowledge if he is to defeat the horde and lead his class to safety.”

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  3. Posted: June 18, 2018In: Comedy

    After finally meeting the woman of his dreams, a bumbling 54 year old must choose between this new romance or the tyrannical lady tied up in his basement he pretends is his wife.

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    Added an answer on June 19, 2018 at 11:42 am

    Two things that might help?your story. The first would address dpg's point: The woman isn't real. In fact, it would be the big reveal of the movie, the woman in the basement was a figment of his imagination the whole time. Possibly the 'new' girlfriend goes down the basement and he tries to stop?herRead more

    Two things that might help?your story.

    The first would address dpg’s point: The woman isn’t real. In fact, it would be the big reveal of the movie, the woman in the basement was a figment of his imagination the whole time.
    Possibly the ‘new’ girlfriend goes down the basement and he tries to stop?her only nothing is there but a mannequin. (Or something?like that)

    The other idea would be the opposite, she is real but she also nags him and never does what she is told. Now he has found a real girl and he tries to release her from his basement… and she refuses to go. She just won’t leave.

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