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When a young, British Muslim develops an obsession online with a maniacal and violently motivated con-women, he must attempt to maintain control despite being coerced toward instigating a terror situation on a London commuter train.
Two things could help improve this logline 1: A stronger inciting incident: In your logline, you say he "... develops an obsession" something like that happens over time, instead you should have him be the victim of an injustice of some sort. Maybe he's attacked by skinheads and the assailants are nRead more
Two things could help improve this logline
1: A stronger inciting incident: In your logline, you say he “… develops an obsession” something like that happens over time, instead you should have him be the victim of an injustice of some sort. Maybe he’s attacked by skinheads and the assailants are never arrested. Some event that makes us understand why he would allow himself to become radicalized.
2: The other direction you might go with this logline is to have a different lead character through whose eyes we see this kid get radicalized; maybe a sister or best friend.? The new lead character’s goal would be to save them from the con woman as they grow increasingly under their seductive control.
See lessAfter a massive deadly zombie attack, a brave and honorable, brought back to life, police officer wants to save his town and citizens from the bloody carnivores. He goes towards achieving his goal in order to kill the last zombie leader and become ?alive? again.
Possible title: Medal of Horror
Possible title: Medal of Horror
See lessAfter a massive deadly zombie attack, a brave and honorable, brought back to life, police officer wants to save his town and citizens from the bloody carnivores. He goes towards achieving his goal in order to kill the last zombie leader and become ?alive? again.
"When he returns as a zombie, a formerly dead, medal of honor winner chooses to fight against his new brain eating brethren, in order to defeat the evil that's creating the undead apocalypse."
“When he returns as a zombie, a formerly dead, medal of honor winner chooses to fight against his new brain eating brethren, in order to defeat the evil that’s creating the undead apocalypse.”
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