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When a female editor working overnight with her careerist cameraman discovers he’s the perpetrator in his acquired murder footage, she must safely evacuate the studio
I am assuming she looks at the wrong footage. I think this story works, especially if you give a good reason why the building is on lockdown and there are no security?personnel?around Here is an attempt, I am not sure it is a final logline but hopefully it is a step in the right direction: ---------Read more
I am assuming she looks at the wrong footage.
See lessI think this story works, especially if you give a good reason why the building is on lockdown and there are no security?personnel?around
Here is an attempt, I am not sure it is a final logline but hopefully it is a step in the right direction:
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“When she discovers her cameraman is a murderer, a career editor working overnight must find a way to escape or be the star in the psychopaths latest snuff film.”
Re=edit As a zombie virus infects friends and family two small town stoners discover they are immune. Using their girlfriends as bait they save the community by luring the town to the school gym and getting them high.
You shouldn't give away the ending in a logline. Inciting incident: Jamaican virus/immunity Lead character: a stoner Goal: Round up the town and save them before they are killed. "When he discovers he's immune to the Jamaican?zombie virus, the town stoner and his friends have one night to round up tRead more
You shouldn’t give away the ending in a logline.
Inciting incident: Jamaican virus/immunity
Lead character: a stoner
Goal: Round up the town and save them before they are killed.
“When he discovers he’s immune to the Jamaican?zombie virus, the town stoner and his friends have one night to round up the townsfolk and get them high or they will remain zombies forever.”
See lessEdited: When an seasoned womanizer transforms his female best friend from a clinger to a player and finds himself attracted to his new creation, but realizes the repercussions of his teachings is worst than he imagined.
Another cool plot point you could use in a story like this.His female friend, the one he turned into a maneater, gets angry when he tries to change her back to who she was. She accuses him of being jealous because she is better and scamming than he was. So they decide on a competition, Word of honorRead more
Another cool plot point you could use in a story like this.
His female friend, the one he turned into a maneater, gets angry when he tries to change her back to who she was.
She accuses him of being jealous because she is better and scamming than he was.
So they decide on a competition, Word of honor, how many people can they get to get to fall in love with them in a one week period.
The competition ends in a tie.
She’s about to walk away in a huff and he says “you win” she gets confused “But it’s a tie?”
See lessAt which point he takes her hand and confesses that he loves her.
They kiss, roll credits: The End.