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When a fragile single girl wins a holiday vacation at 28, she has 3 weeks to go into a meaningful relationship or risk relapsing into depression
There is a disconnect between winning the cruise and falling into depression. After all, why not just take a best friend and try to meet a guy on the cruise? ------------- "When she discovers her ex and his new wife will be taking the same cruise to the Bahamas, a depressed single girl has two weeksRead more
There is a disconnect between winning the cruise and falling into depression. After all, why not just take a best friend and try to meet a guy on the cruise?
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“When she discovers her ex and his new wife will be taking the same cruise to the Bahamas, a depressed single girl has two weeks to find the perfect guy to pretend to be her date for the trip.”
When an adrift M?ori minor is stuck in state care, he must befriend a benevolent pedophile to escape the unjust social welfare system of the ?60s.
I actually think this logline works.There is an obvious built-in?conflict because your lead is a minor but he must seek help from a pedophile.It also gives us the basic information we need to understand;who the lead character is,where the setting takes placeand why the pro-active goal of the lead chRead more
I actually think this logline works.
There is an obvious built-in?conflict because your lead is a minor but he must seek help from a pedophile.
It also gives us the basic information we need to understand;
who the lead character is,
where the setting takes place
and why the pro-active goal of the lead character is important enough that he might seek help from such an unsavory character.
You might say ‘forced into’ instead of ‘stuck in’ to give the inciting incident a little more strength, but other than that.? I think this is pretty good as far as the logline goes.
See lessA hunter/slayer hybrid woman takes on the world’s monster in her normal life Seattle, which changes when she meets a sorcerer who is cursed to live in the shadows.
Just curious, why must she take on the monsters of the world? Why her? ----- "When she's told she's the chosen one by a cursed sorcerer, a Seattle woman discovers only she can take on the everything that goes bump in the night and protect her city" ----- (Obviously, it needs that one extra thing soRead more
Just curious, why must she take on the monsters of the world? Why her?
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“When she’s told she’s the chosen one by a cursed sorcerer, a Seattle woman discovers only she can take on the everything that goes bump in the night and protect her city”
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(Obviously, it needs that one extra thing so it doesn’t sound like Buffy)