1. Posted: March 20, 2018In:

    A professional doppelganger of a famous actor, impregnates both his wife and his lover. Using his fame as his currency, he pays a hefty price for adultery.

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    In this version of the logline, you haven't given your lead character?a goal.

    In this version of the logline, you haven’t given your lead character?a goal.

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  2. Posted: March 17, 2018In:

    In Johannesburg in 1984, a black gay, political activist determined to rewrite the constitution of a nation, is arrested, faced with the death penalty, he must fight against a police officer with a personal vendetta and an AIDS diagnosis that only gives him a few months to live.

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    When I think of South Africa in 1984 I think Apartheid If your lead character's gay?orientation is important to the logline and you don't want to take it out because he is fighting for gay rights, not against apartheid, then you should mention the fight for gay rights in the logline.

    When I think of South Africa in 1984 I think Apartheid

    If your lead character’s gay?orientation is important to the logline and you don’t want to take it out because he is fighting for gay rights, not against apartheid, then you should mention the fight for gay rights in the logline.

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  3. Posted: March 17, 2018In:

    After being arrested for having dangerous future technology, the prison unleashes a hyper aggressive android, loyal to him, upon the police station in an attempt to escape.

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    "After he's arrested, an evil genius unleashes a mind-controlled battle droid on an unsuspecting police station forcing the men in blue to either somehow destroy the robot or illegally kill their?prisoner."

    “After he’s arrested, an evil genius unleashes a mind-controlled battle droid on an unsuspecting police station forcing the men in blue to either somehow destroy the robot or illegally kill their?prisoner.”

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