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E.T.A. is about a professional contract killer, who works as a flight attendant, enabling her to travel the world performing political assassinations.
This is another logline that you have written from the point of view of a narrator instead of the lead character.
This is another logline that you have written from the point of view of a narrator instead of the lead character.
See lessAfter a lovesick flight attendant and the wife of a doppelganger of a famous actor becomes pregnant by him, he sets out to convince them to share a home with him.
This is written?in such a way that I am not sure who is who. Also, I am not sure you have actually written any conflict into your logline.
This is written?in such a way that I am not sure who is who.
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LOYAL ENEMIES: A slick grifter uses his sexuality to convince a wealthy, lonely socialite to back him in a high stakes poker game. He soon finds the deck stacked against him.
The logline is mostly?set-up not story. Who is opposing the lead character, what specifically is standing in his way? What are the stakes? What personal thing will the lead character lose if he doesn't succeed? What situation is motivating the lead character? Why does the lead character 'need' to wiRead more
The logline is mostly?set-up not story.
Who is opposing the lead character, what specifically is standing in his way?
What are the stakes? What personal thing will the lead character lose if he doesn’t succeed?
What situation is motivating the lead character? Why does the lead character ‘need’ to win this tournament?
This is all missing from your logline.
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