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After several defeats, a determined young boxer prepares for a last chance to reignite his career while dealing with his unsupportive family and the hoodlums he grew up with.
While this would definitely?be an odd turn for your story What if you made your lead character Muslim His parents are first generation immigrants He grew up in America where the idea of 'follow your dream' is innate. His parents believe in hard work and stability, they want him to take over the famiRead more
While this would definitely?be an odd turn for your story
What if you made your lead character Muslim
His parents are first generation immigrants
He grew up in America where the idea of ‘follow your dream’ is innate.
His parents believe in hard work and stability, they want him to take over the family business they build from the ground up.
They want him to give up this foolish dream of boxing
Now the event happens, out of the blue he gets a big match, the kind that will make or break his career
But he gets no support from those he loves, no matter how much he tries to convince them this is the path he must take.
Just an idea, something that might separate your story from other boxing stories. (I honestly don’t think I have ever seen a movie about a Muslim boxer)
See lessAfter a well planned ambush on an armored truck carrying arms, a cop must find the people behind it before the weapons hit the streets.
While the premise is good, I think you may need that one extra element to hook the idea with the reader ------------------------------------------------------------ "When MS-13 steals a huge arms shipment, a mercurial police translator is teamed with a hard-nosed?detective to find the shipment beforRead more
While the premise is good, I think you may need that one extra element to hook the idea with the reader
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“When MS-13 steals a huge arms shipment, a mercurial police translator is teamed with a hard-nosed?detective to find the shipment before the guns hit the streets.”
An out-for-himself and talented brain hacker, who sells off stolen ideas and concepts to large conglomerates, is hired to escort a scientist, who holds the key to clean energy in her head, to open source rebels so she can provide the idea free to all humanity.
Why him?(I mean he seems like the last person they would want helping the scientist since he is a brain thief and all... unless of course there was some event, some plot point that forces the lead character to help the scientist...)
Why him?
(I mean he seems like the last person they would want helping the scientist since he is a brain thief and all… unless of course there was some event, some plot point that forces the lead character to help the scientist…)
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