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In late nineteenth century America a Ghanaian former slave seeks revenge for the murder of his wife and child; he must team up with his former owner, a retired bounty hunter trying to renounce his violent past.
Revenge for what?
Revenge for what?
See lessDevastated by the murder of his famous screenwriters murder, only brother seeks justice as police and FBI aren’t making enough progress, and pursues bipolar suspect, hindered at every turn by influential family.
One of the problems with this logline is we know more about the victim than the lead character, The victim is a famous screenwriter, the lead character is a brother. I would switch that around... drop the details about the brother in the logline and add details about the lead character so we get anRead more
One of the problems with this logline is we know more about the victim than the lead character,
The victim is a famous screenwriter, the lead character is a brother.
I would switch that around…
drop the details about the brother in the logline and add details about the lead character so we get an idea of who we are following.
“When his famous brother is ritually murdered, a struggling writer delves into the shadowy world of the occult to discover the killer”
See lessFueled by an encounter with a haunted house, a novice paranormal investigator battles the supernatural for those with nowhere else to turn with her reluctant best friend.
I know you have tried quite a few loglines. However, this attempt is a little awkward in its wording."When his brother is killed by an evil spirit, a novice paranormal investigator?and his best friend search for clues as to what killed him while helping others struggling with supernatural forces."
I know you have tried quite a few loglines. However, this attempt is a little awkward in its wording.
“When his brother is killed by an evil spirit, a novice paranormal investigator?and his best friend search for clues as to what killed him while helping others struggling with supernatural forces.”
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