Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
A failed detective’s visitations from the apparition of his comically repugnant deaf mother inveigle him to confront his flaws. He must transform to understand her true demise or his family will implode.
I like the thought that the mother might be a hallucination. If that is the case. I would add that the mother is a hallucination if it is known to the reader from the beginning, I would withhold that the mother is a hallucination, if that information is a big reveal.
I like the thought that the mother might be a hallucination.
If that is the case. I would add that the mother is a hallucination if it is known to the reader from the beginning, I would withhold that the mother is a hallucination, if that information is a big reveal.
See lessA law abiding father turns himself in after conspiring to help jewel thieves to pay for his son’s vital medical treatment.
I am not sure what this story is about, The story begins with the father turning himself in after a jewel heist. Is the story about the trial? Is it about the Jewel thieves attempting to shut up the father? If so that should be in the logline.
I am not sure what this story is about, The story begins with the father turning himself in after a jewel heist. Is the story about the trial? Is it about the Jewel thieves attempting to shut up the father? If so that should be in the logline.
See lessA failed detective’s visitations from the apparition of his comically repugnant deaf mother inveigle him to confront his flaws. He must transform to understand her true demise or his family will implode.
"When he becomes haunted by his nagging, passive agressive mother, a failed detective must solve the mystery behind her death if he is to exorcise her from his life." Possible Title: You'll be the death of me
“When he becomes haunted by his nagging, passive agressive mother, a failed detective must solve the mystery behind her death if he is to exorcise her from his life.”
Possible Title: You’ll be the death of me
See less