1. Posted: January 8, 2022In:

    When a school child is killed in a botched kidnapping case, a young superhero decides to retire, but her long-lost nemesis reappears–an evil superhero who also happens to be her brother.

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    Richiev Singularity

    What is the forward story? Half the logline is backstory. What does her Nemesis (Brother) want? What are the stakes? What must the lead do to stop him? Example: "When her evil brother attempts to crash the moon into the earth, a disgraced retired superhero must rally all the meta-humans in order toRead more

    What is the forward story? Half the logline is backstory.

    What does her Nemesis (Brother) want?
    What are the stakes?
    What must the lead do to stop him?

    Example: “When her evil brother attempts to crash the moon into the earth, a disgraced retired superhero must rally all the meta-humans in order to defeat his dastardly world-destroying plans.”

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  2. Posted: January 6, 2022In:

    A family man is surprised by an old girlfriend on his birthday and must confront his past to save his future.

    Richiev Singularity

    If the goal of the lead character is to 'save his future' then in the logline you should tell us in a word or two what is threatening his future.

    If the goal of the lead character is to ‘save his future’ then in the logline you should tell us in a word or two what is threatening his future.

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  3. Posted: December 14, 2021In:

    An ex-soldier working for a Security company as a security guard gets stuck in a drug set-up targeting his employer. Chased by the police, he has to fight a controvert ex-Marshal of the Army while escaping the cops to prove his innocence, save his life and that of his love ones.

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    "When a drug raid targets his employer, a security guard must prove his innocence while on the run from the police and an ex-army marshal."

    “When a drug raid targets his employer, a security guard must prove his innocence while on the run from the police and an ex-army marshal.”

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