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The brutality of Evil Dead meets the psychological side of The Sixth Sense when two lovers, two kidnappers, their victim, and a cop find themselves trapped in a dimension of emptiness which links one world to another
Who is the lead character? What do they want? What is standing in their way?
Who is the lead character?
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What is standing in their way?
A battered wife seduces a sexaholic lawyer as part of a desperate plan to free herself from her marriage by framing her violently jealous husband for murder, but when things go wrong she needs to think fast and make a new plan before her husband kills her.
Whose murder?
Whose murder?
See lessWhen a greedy bounty hunter fails to capture a regicide and is falsely accused of being her ally, the two must work together to fight outlaws and retrieve sacred relics to earn a wish and clear their names.
First, this logline attempt is an improvementHowever, I guess my problem with the 'wish' aspect of the logline (The same thing that struck me about the first attempt) Is that the lead character is going to wish (A very fantastical element) for something he could reasonably accomplish himself.SomoneRead more
First, this logline attempt is an improvement
However, I guess my problem with the ‘wish’ aspect of the logline (The same thing that struck me about the first attempt) Is that the lead character is going to wish (A very fantastical element) for something he could reasonably accomplish himself.
Somone has killed the king,
the lead character?is falsely accused,
He is a bounty hunter
he tracks people for a living,
so in order to clear his name without using magic, he would track the real killers and bring them to justice…
Considering your lead character is a bounty hunter, this does not seem unreasonable. (In fact, tracking people down and bringing them to justice is the definition of bounty hunter)
Why do you have your lead character ‘wish’ for something he could reasonably do himself?
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