You might want to tell us what the lead character’s goal is, what does the lead character want?

Also you mention comedy in the logline but nothing really points to comedy. You should add a quirk to let people know it is a comedy and take out the part where you ‘tell’ us it’s a a dramatic comedy,?You should show us by how the logline is written and not tell us.

Finally, saying she was exiled for her sexuality and also for having a child out of wedlock seems like overkill (For the logline, not the story) You should pick the most important element and drop the other one (Just for the logline, keep it in the story)

Anyway, I am only talking logline issues, the story itself seems interesting.