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When broke indie movie-maker and his friends heads into a desert to shot found footage horror movie, they stumble upon a real monster and have to fight to survive.
Also, does you indie movie director have a goal? Is he about to lose his home? Is his wife making him quit unless he makes a hit film? (She has given him 10 years to follow his dream, now with only a few months left this is his last chance) Is he about to lose his company? The lead having a goal couRead more
Also, does you indie movie director have a goal? Is he about to lose his home? Is his wife making him quit unless he makes a hit film? (She has given him 10 years to follow his dream, now with only a few months left this is his last chance) Is he about to lose his company?
The lead having a goal could also help distinguish your story. (Just a thought)
See lessWhen broke indie movie-maker and his friends heads into a desert to shot found footage horror movie, they stumble upon a real monster and have to fight to survive.
Nir and SavinhO are giving good advice. As it reads now, it is simply Blair Witch in the desert, adding a few specifics will help separate your story from that story. Monster is vague. What monster? Is it a giant ant, Bigfoot, an alien out for human brains? It doesn't add that many words to name theRead more
Nir and SavinhO are giving good advice. As it reads now, it is simply Blair Witch in the desert, adding a few specifics will help separate your story from that story.
Monster is vague. What monster? Is it a giant ant, Bigfoot, an alien out for human brains? It doesn’t add that many words to name the monster. It will help to be specific.
See lessWhen a starry-eyed, awkward girl is stabbed protecting the object of her unrequited love, her beloved?s cowardly behaviour compels her to look for another boyfriend?based on more than just good looks.
After the lead dumps her rotten boyfriend, and before the main plot begins you should have a few scenes where she awkwardly tries dating on her own. 1: She tries sexting a guy (PG13) video tapes herself dancing in her underwear... it goes live to all her friends 2: She gets set up on a blind date: HRead more
After the lead dumps her rotten boyfriend, and before the main plot begins you should have a few scenes where she awkwardly tries dating on her own.
1: She tries sexting a guy (PG13) video tapes herself dancing in her underwear… it goes live to all her friends
2: She gets set up on a blind date: He turns out to be 70 and keeps falling asleep at the restaurant. (“You’ll love him, he’s a Marine veteran…” fails to say it was the Korean war)
3: She tries online dating only to accidentally get on the wrong site and her match turns out to be a very butch lesbian. (Only works if the lead is straight)
4: She tries a singles group at her church… Her mom is there, and her mom has better luck than she.
That is when out of the blue, she gets a number or sees a commercial or a friend tells her about… What ever your hook is. (The matchmaker who has never failed to produce a match)
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