1. Posted: November 21, 2017In:

    When a fashion designer finds herself falling in love with a entrepreneur suffering from PTSD, she must find a way to get through him to love and trust her from a repetitive past that hurt him in the first place.

    Richiev Singularity

    When you say "must" in a logline, you should give us the "Or else"If there is no "or else, I would take out the "must" and re-word it.

    When you say “must” in a logline, you should give us the “Or else”

    If there is no “or else, I would take out the “must” and re-word it.

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  2. Posted: November 19, 2017In:

    A lonely computer programmer, looking for Mr. Right, must find a way to regain access to the empathetic AI, she inadvertently created, which the government has quarantined and designated a security risk.

    Richiev Singularity

    "When the government confiscates the empathetic AI she created, a lonely programmer must..."

    “When the government confiscates the empathetic AI she created, a lonely programmer must…”

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  3. Posted: November 17, 2017In:

    A kind-hearted, school teacher is ready to move into his first home but finds one problem–a woman in a blood-stained nightgown–hiding in the closet.

    Richiev Singularity

    "When he discovers a woman in a blood-stained nightgown in his new home, a kind-heated school teacher calls the police and they come and get her."

    “When he discovers a woman in a blood-stained nightgown in his new home, a kind-heated school teacher calls the police and they come and get her.”

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