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When she inadvertently creates an empathetic AI in her online search for Mr. Right, a lonely computer programmer, comes under intense government scrutiny, which leaves her with only one option?interacting with a human.
Here is your last attempt and the new attempt. A lonely computer programmer, looking for Mr. Right, is shut down by the government for creating an empathetic AI, so she tries something unorthodox?interacting with a human. When she inadvertently creates an empathetic AI in her online search for Mr. RRead more
Here is your last attempt and the new attempt.
- When she inadvertently creates an empathetic AI in her online search for Mr. Right, a lonely computer programmer, comes under intense government scrutiny, which leaves her with only one option?interacting with a human.
See lessWhen she inadvertently creates an empathetic AI in her online search for Mr. Right, a lonely computer programmer, comes under intense government scrutiny, which leaves her with only one option?interacting with a human.
While there are some cosmetic changes to your logline, it isn't that much different than your last attempt. The incident which sets the story in motion should lead to a goal... Instead your incident "The government taking away the thinking program" leads to the lead character giving up. The incitingRead more
While there are some cosmetic changes to your logline, it isn’t that much different than your last attempt.
The incident which sets the story in motion should lead to a goal… Instead your incident “The government taking away the thinking program” leads to the lead character giving up.
The inciting incident and the goal should relate to one another. Her AI get’s taken away, she vows to get it back. There is an action and a reaction.
Anyway, there is definite potential for this story, hopefully you can get a logline that is equally interesting as the concept.
See lessThe televised poker tournament is on an hour break and the chip leader is locked in a utility closet; she hears a bomb ticking. Can she defuse it and get back in time to win?
In general I would avoid rhetorical questions in a logline... "Will our caped crusader finally meet his end?" "Will the Joker's dastardly plan succeed?" Tune in next week, same bat channel, same bat time to find out.
In general I would avoid rhetorical questions in a logline…
“Will our caped crusader finally meet his end?” “Will the Joker’s dastardly plan succeed?” Tune in next week, same bat channel, same bat time to find out.
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