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A young aid worker tormented by his dreams learns humanity has been manipulated for aeons. Only by accepting the past does he have a chance to save the future, humanity and the people he loves.
"Accepting the past" is the action your lead character must take in order to achiever the goal of saving humanity. This action does not seem like it would be exciting or compelling to watch on screen and probably will not hook the reader. You might want to give your logline a more compelling actionRead more
“Accepting the past” is the action your lead character must take in order to achiever the goal of saving humanity.
This action does not seem like it would be exciting or compelling to watch on screen and probably will not hook the reader.
You might want to give your logline a more compelling action that the character ‘must take’. in order to make the logline more exciting.
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It would help if there was an antagonist. A reason why she 'must' discover who she is or else (This bad thing will happen)
It would help if there was an antagonist. A reason why she ‘must’ discover who she is or else (This bad thing will happen)
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I can't picture the world divided into two... Is it divided between, men and women? is it divided between black and white? Is it physically cut in half?
I can’t picture the world divided into two… Is it divided between, men and women? is it divided between black and white? Is it physically cut in half?
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